Post by Carly on Mar 31, 2005 9:50:35 GMT -5
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Chapter 1
“Do, do, do, do, do, doooo!” belts out of Niki’s alarm clock. She rolls out of bed and then goes to the window to see the dull, gloomy day that beckons her. She turns round to see Tom and the rest of his McFly band mates gazing down at her. Her life at the moment is depressing and unexciting and the only thing that brings a smile to her face is Tom, Danny, Harry and Dougie. She follows the same routine every single day. She catches the same no. 7 bus to college and back. She sits in the same seat in her music class. She talks to the same people, sees the same faces, over and over again.
Niki is an attractive young girl, tall with long brown layered hair and big hazel eyes. Shes extremely talented and plays the bass and regular guitar and dreams of fronting her own band one day. She is shy but has an active personality. She is just a young lass looking for some excitement in her life, a guy to keep her company, someone new to talk to. If only she could just unexpectedly bump into Tom from McFly one day and fall madly in love with him! But she already is madly in love with him! And he is with her… in her dreams! She knows everything about him even down to the colour of his car! If only she could just meet him, if only…<br>
Chapter 2
Meanwhile, in London Tom, Danny, Harry and Dougie otherwise known as McFly have just announced their first ever headline tour after they secured the number one spot of the album charts with their debut album Room On The Third Floor.
That day in Edinburgh, it was a horrible gloomy day. Niki had just come home from another boring day at college. She sat at her computer desk and opened her mailbox.‘Junk, junk, junk’ she said as she scrolled down the list of her emails. But there was one email that caught her eye, it was from the McFly Street Team and it’s subject was, ‘McFly’s first ever Headline tour!’. Niki was grinning from ear to ear, but then thought they’ll never come to Scotland. She opened the email anyway, but there amongst the long list of dates she saw ‘27th September -Glasgow’ .
‘Oh my God!’ she yelped, ‘I have to get front row tickets!’
She ran downstairs in a panic.
‘Mum!’ she screamed, grinding to a halt in the kitchen where her Mum was cooking dinner.
‘Whatever’s the matter Niki? Have you hurt yourself?’ asked her Mum looking extremely worried.
‘No, no, no! McFly are coming to Scotland! On their headline tour!’ she exclaimed excitedly.
‘Is that all?’ her Mum said disappointingly.
‘What do you mean is that all?! I have to go to that concert! I have to get front row seats and be near to Tom! Please can I go?’
‘Ask your father.’ said her Mum returning to prepare their dinner.
Dripping wet from the rain, Niki’s father walked through the front door to be greeted by a rather ecstatic looking Niki offering a hot mug of tea.
‘Thought you might like this after being caught out in that weather!’ she chirped.
‘What do you want now, Niki?’ he asked.
‘Ummmmmmm…. Can I go to the McFly concert… in Glasgow… in September…please?!’
‘What? McFly concert? Glasgow? September?’ he said. ‘But what about your school work, madame?’
‘Oh, one night won’t hurt Dad, pleeeeaasssee!’
‘Ask your Mother!’
‘I did! She said to ask you!’
‘Oh, I suppose you can go then!’
‘Yaaaayyyy!’ she screamed, tightly hugging her father.
She ran upstairs, jumped on to her bed, grabbed her mobile phone and rang her best friend, Amy to tell her the good news.
‘I’m allowed! We’re going to the McFly concert!’ she told her friend excitedly. ‘Now all I need to do now is to make a plan to meet Tom!’ she giggled.
Chapter 3
‘I can’t believe we camped out here all night Niki!’ said Amy wriggling out of her sleeping bag.
‘It’s the only way I know that ensures us getting front row tickets!’
‘I like McFly, but I’m not obsessed like you!’
‘I’m not obsessed, well maybe I am but I just want to get near to Tom’
Niki jumps up at the sight of the box office window opening, knocking a hot flask of tea over all Amy.
‘Two front row tickets please!’ she shouts at the woman in the box office.
‘Sure, what block would you like them in? Left, mid…’
‘The left!’ she squeals. The left is Toms side of the stage.
‘Okie Dokie’ says the woman. ‘Two row A seats in the left front block, that’s £40 please’
‘Ahhhhhh! I can’t wait!’
That evening the girls decide to have a sleepover to plan their mission to meet Tom and the rest of McFly when they come to Scotland.
‘Pass the Doritos, Amy’
‘There ya go’
‘Now,’ said Niki with a mouthful of crisps. ‘What are we going to do on the day of the concert?’
‘Why don’t we both skip college for the day and try and meet them when they go in?’ Amy suggests.
‘Yeah, we might as well make a day of it, whether we meet them or not! Oh my god, what am I going to wear! My outfit is gonna need major planning, I need to look my best for Tom!’ she said with a cheeky little giggle.
‘We wanna knock em dead!’ said Amy.
‘I might, but I don’t know about you!’ joked Niki. The two girls burst out into fits of laughter.
Chapter 4
It was the 27th of September. The day of the McFly concert.
‘Good Morning, you’re listening to Real Radio, bringing the best music to Edinburgh and it’s surrounding areas. Stay tuned for an exclusive McFly competition.’ blares out the alarm clock. Niki is suddenly wide awake at the word, McFly.
‘McFly!!! Competition!!! Oh My God!!!… Paper! Where’s my pen?!’ she squeals trying to find a pen that actually works.
‘Ah ha! Got ya!’ She finally found a pen that works so she goes to sit patiently on her bed to hear more information on this exclusive McFly competition.
‘As you all probably know the hottest band in the country at the moment, McFly are playing in Edinburgh tonight,’ explains the DJ. ‘And get this, we have got two VIP backstage passes to give away to one very lucky listener! All you have to do is answer this very simple question, what is the name of McFly’s debut album? If you know the answer call 0800 234 234 right NOW and if you are caller number 10 then you will win that very special prize!’
Niki rushes to the phone and dials the number as quickly as possible.
‘Please stay on the line’ says the automated message.
5 minutes later.
‘OK! The lines for the McFly competition are now closed so lets see who is lucky caller number 10’ says he DJ. ‘Hello! Who’s that?’ asks the DJ.
Niki’s heart practically stopped as she heard the DJ talking to her. It was her line. Line number 10.
‘OH MY GOD!’ she squealed, jumping up and down on her bed. ’Hello! It’s Niki!’
‘Hello Niki! Well done you’re caller number 10! But before we can give you those extra special McFly tickets all you have to do is answer the all important question, what is the name of…’
‘ROOM ON THE THIRD FLOOOOOOR!’ she screamed.
‘Ha Ha! Ok we’ll give you the tickets! Have a great time and stay on the line so we can get your deets!’
‘Oh my god, thank you sooooo much!’ she screeched running around her bedroom in excitement.
Could this be her chance to get Tom, the man of her dreams? All will be revealed…<br>
Chapter 5 coming later today!
Chapter 1
“Do, do, do, do, do, doooo!” belts out of Niki’s alarm clock. She rolls out of bed and then goes to the window to see the dull, gloomy day that beckons her. She turns round to see Tom and the rest of his McFly band mates gazing down at her. Her life at the moment is depressing and unexciting and the only thing that brings a smile to her face is Tom, Danny, Harry and Dougie. She follows the same routine every single day. She catches the same no. 7 bus to college and back. She sits in the same seat in her music class. She talks to the same people, sees the same faces, over and over again.
Niki is an attractive young girl, tall with long brown layered hair and big hazel eyes. Shes extremely talented and plays the bass and regular guitar and dreams of fronting her own band one day. She is shy but has an active personality. She is just a young lass looking for some excitement in her life, a guy to keep her company, someone new to talk to. If only she could just unexpectedly bump into Tom from McFly one day and fall madly in love with him! But she already is madly in love with him! And he is with her… in her dreams! She knows everything about him even down to the colour of his car! If only she could just meet him, if only…<br>
Chapter 2
Meanwhile, in London Tom, Danny, Harry and Dougie otherwise known as McFly have just announced their first ever headline tour after they secured the number one spot of the album charts with their debut album Room On The Third Floor.
That day in Edinburgh, it was a horrible gloomy day. Niki had just come home from another boring day at college. She sat at her computer desk and opened her mailbox.‘Junk, junk, junk’ she said as she scrolled down the list of her emails. But there was one email that caught her eye, it was from the McFly Street Team and it’s subject was, ‘McFly’s first ever Headline tour!’. Niki was grinning from ear to ear, but then thought they’ll never come to Scotland. She opened the email anyway, but there amongst the long list of dates she saw ‘27th September -Glasgow’ .
‘Oh my God!’ she yelped, ‘I have to get front row tickets!’
She ran downstairs in a panic.
‘Mum!’ she screamed, grinding to a halt in the kitchen where her Mum was cooking dinner.
‘Whatever’s the matter Niki? Have you hurt yourself?’ asked her Mum looking extremely worried.
‘No, no, no! McFly are coming to Scotland! On their headline tour!’ she exclaimed excitedly.
‘Is that all?’ her Mum said disappointingly.
‘What do you mean is that all?! I have to go to that concert! I have to get front row seats and be near to Tom! Please can I go?’
‘Ask your father.’ said her Mum returning to prepare their dinner.
Dripping wet from the rain, Niki’s father walked through the front door to be greeted by a rather ecstatic looking Niki offering a hot mug of tea.
‘Thought you might like this after being caught out in that weather!’ she chirped.
‘What do you want now, Niki?’ he asked.
‘Ummmmmmm…. Can I go to the McFly concert… in Glasgow… in September…please?!’
‘What? McFly concert? Glasgow? September?’ he said. ‘But what about your school work, madame?’
‘Oh, one night won’t hurt Dad, pleeeeaasssee!’
‘Ask your Mother!’
‘I did! She said to ask you!’
‘Oh, I suppose you can go then!’
‘Yaaaayyyy!’ she screamed, tightly hugging her father.
She ran upstairs, jumped on to her bed, grabbed her mobile phone and rang her best friend, Amy to tell her the good news.
‘I’m allowed! We’re going to the McFly concert!’ she told her friend excitedly. ‘Now all I need to do now is to make a plan to meet Tom!’ she giggled.
Chapter 3
‘I can’t believe we camped out here all night Niki!’ said Amy wriggling out of her sleeping bag.
‘It’s the only way I know that ensures us getting front row tickets!’
‘I like McFly, but I’m not obsessed like you!’
‘I’m not obsessed, well maybe I am but I just want to get near to Tom’
Niki jumps up at the sight of the box office window opening, knocking a hot flask of tea over all Amy.
‘Two front row tickets please!’ she shouts at the woman in the box office.
‘Sure, what block would you like them in? Left, mid…’
‘The left!’ she squeals. The left is Toms side of the stage.
‘Okie Dokie’ says the woman. ‘Two row A seats in the left front block, that’s £40 please’
‘Ahhhhhh! I can’t wait!’
That evening the girls decide to have a sleepover to plan their mission to meet Tom and the rest of McFly when they come to Scotland.
‘Pass the Doritos, Amy’
‘There ya go’
‘Now,’ said Niki with a mouthful of crisps. ‘What are we going to do on the day of the concert?’
‘Why don’t we both skip college for the day and try and meet them when they go in?’ Amy suggests.
‘Yeah, we might as well make a day of it, whether we meet them or not! Oh my god, what am I going to wear! My outfit is gonna need major planning, I need to look my best for Tom!’ she said with a cheeky little giggle.
‘We wanna knock em dead!’ said Amy.
‘I might, but I don’t know about you!’ joked Niki. The two girls burst out into fits of laughter.
Chapter 4
It was the 27th of September. The day of the McFly concert.
‘Good Morning, you’re listening to Real Radio, bringing the best music to Edinburgh and it’s surrounding areas. Stay tuned for an exclusive McFly competition.’ blares out the alarm clock. Niki is suddenly wide awake at the word, McFly.
‘McFly!!! Competition!!! Oh My God!!!… Paper! Where’s my pen?!’ she squeals trying to find a pen that actually works.
‘Ah ha! Got ya!’ She finally found a pen that works so she goes to sit patiently on her bed to hear more information on this exclusive McFly competition.
‘As you all probably know the hottest band in the country at the moment, McFly are playing in Edinburgh tonight,’ explains the DJ. ‘And get this, we have got two VIP backstage passes to give away to one very lucky listener! All you have to do is answer this very simple question, what is the name of McFly’s debut album? If you know the answer call 0800 234 234 right NOW and if you are caller number 10 then you will win that very special prize!’
Niki rushes to the phone and dials the number as quickly as possible.
‘Please stay on the line’ says the automated message.
5 minutes later.
‘OK! The lines for the McFly competition are now closed so lets see who is lucky caller number 10’ says he DJ. ‘Hello! Who’s that?’ asks the DJ.
Niki’s heart practically stopped as she heard the DJ talking to her. It was her line. Line number 10.
‘OH MY GOD!’ she squealed, jumping up and down on her bed. ’Hello! It’s Niki!’
‘Hello Niki! Well done you’re caller number 10! But before we can give you those extra special McFly tickets all you have to do is answer the all important question, what is the name of…’
‘ROOM ON THE THIRD FLOOOOOOR!’ she screamed.
‘Ha Ha! Ok we’ll give you the tickets! Have a great time and stay on the line so we can get your deets!’
‘Oh my god, thank you sooooo much!’ she screeched running around her bedroom in excitement.
Could this be her chance to get Tom, the man of her dreams? All will be revealed…<br>
Chapter 5 coming later today!
